Hello! Great job in selecting an article for you topic...your article is pretty close to perfect: it gives background information to the readers, it has engaging details, it has a catchy beginning. But most importantly, it keeps the reader on the topic of Ecstacy and nothing else.
Ravers is a pretty cool topic and can be thought of as an "underground" group since most of what is done at raves is frowned upon by most of society, many of them not having experienced it. I know people who have done E before so if you wanna talk to anyone about the first hand affects and not just what people put in news articles I can put ya in touch with them. Also I would look into the Detroit Electronic Music Festival, pretty big techno fest that's held during the summer.
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Hello!
Great job in selecting an article for you topic...your article is pretty close to perfect: it gives background information to the readers, it has engaging details, it has a catchy beginning. But most importantly, it keeps the reader on the topic of Ecstacy and nothing else.
~ Emily
Ravers is a pretty cool topic and can be thought of as an "underground" group since most of what is done at raves is frowned upon by most of society, many of them not having experienced it. I know people who have done E before so if you wanna talk to anyone about the first hand affects and not just what people put in news articles I can put ya in touch with them. Also I would look into the Detroit Electronic Music Festival, pretty big techno fest that's held during the summer.
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